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He listened to the song as he drove through the night

Haunted by the smile she wore when she heard it

He looked down as the gas light came on

Staring into the darkness ahead he realized he was empty inside

Without that smile or its bearer he was alone

But unlike the car, he would remain empty

She could never feel the same about him

As he disappeared into the blackness of night

The song continued

Tormenting the already aching heart
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my first written deviation
I'm quite proud of it actually
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:iconcome-and-see:
this is beautiful benedikt... sad though it may be. kudos.
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:iconrebacan:
This is the first time I have faved anything but photography but this really does create a very moving picture. :tears:
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:iconislandtime:
this is really good B - I feel all sad now - do you need a hug?
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~Skyhy Mar 29, 2008  Professional Photographer
lol, thank you but don't feel sad, it's just my first foray into the world or literature so it's exagerating somewhat
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:iconislandtime:
ok that's good. Hope you had a good weekend B :hug:
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Nobody Apr 4, 2008
i did, thanks Vik :)
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